Thursday, October 9, 2008

One love is what we need...One love :)

Last time when I wrote Yeh tum Kahan chal diye ( http://somilpatni.blogspot.com/2007/12/yeh-tum-kahan-chal-diye.html) a lot of my friends asked me to write a poem where love does not have a sad ending .So I am trying to look at the other aspect of love here .In this poem I have tried to capture those sweet moments of life when everything is like Sunshine in winter :)

Now a days everything looks changed
Even the dry leaves look colorful again
I keep thinking about her now and then
You can come and tell me that I am going insane

I like walking slowly when she comes by ...
I wish at every moment that time just goes to Stand by

I look around and all I see is her ..
Even in my dreams I keep waving at her
I smile when I hear her voice ...
I really cant help it ...I have no choice

I keep inventing ways to meet her ....
And all the way up to her house I think how to greet her ...
How do I tell her that she is the answer to all my questions ..
and if I go on to describe love ...she will end up as my interpretation .

Does she also think the same about me ..or does she not
Should I talk more in front of her or should I know where to stop
Should I be more jovial or pretend to be serious ...
What does she think about me ..I am completely curious
Love as they say can really affect you in ways ...which can be mysterious.

Be it at office or be it at home ...
I am in my dreamworld with her and me alone
She make my nights longer and my days more bright ...
she has filled my life with unexplainable warmth and delight..

People say nothing good remains forever ...
And this feeling too shall pass away like nothing happened ever..
But it doesnt matter to me which way the story will sway..
all I know now is that love is here to stay ...
whichever way she goes ...it has to be "our" common way

12 comments:

Anonymous said...

Superb!!! Dude you rock !! BTW are you in love ? :P

Unknown said...

Thanks anonymous !! And yes..secrets are not shared with anonymous people :D :D

Denila said...

somil!! aaj maine maan liya..u are an awesome writer!!!! and this poem is amazing..i still cant believe u wrote it!! this is good enough to be published in some bestselling magazine/book..amazing!! and uve described love perfectly(from the guy's view point ofcourse):)

Shirin Gupta said...

Somil !!!!!!!! Dat was awesome.... Dude... I was not aware tht u have dis talent also ... But u r definitely in love.... Kaun hai woh ?????

Unknown said...

@denila :Thanks a ton for the comment .But what took you so long to figure out that I am a awesome writer :P :P..hehehe

@shirin : Koi nahi hain yaar ...isliye apni imagination dauda ke khush ho raha hoon :)
Will really look forward to answer this question in affirmative someday

Kapil Samadhiya said...

Hey Dude....
Have you written this?? :O I can't believe... Its soooooo Nice :) :)

Keep writing, it will help you when you will come to India and search for...... :)

Good Job :)

Kapil Samadhiya

Anonymous said...

hmmm pata nahi inme yeh poet kaha se ghuss aaya shayad kisika asar hai...:D
but a nice poem....(kaha se dhaapi????)

Heena said...

Hey somil. Mr.patni ... its really cool... very touchy kinda. Somil ppl are asking yaar u should reply them... This kinda poem,only the person who is deeply in LOVE can only wirte .. :-) .. And one suggestion ..Its gud flow of ur poem tht person is just listening his heart... their noway to pretent.. I always believe, thru expressing ur feeling ur path is really very easy to cover up :-) ... isnt it .... Keeping blogging ... Add some more intersting topics .. I suppose abt ur exp. at new place ?? what say...

Anubandh said...

Hey Somu! A cute one...And it's so true...once in love one becomes so much cautious about what one does, the way one does and always keep guessing about what she must be thinking...That's the fun of it...May you have all of it and to the fullest!

Keep writing...

abhijit said...

Really a fabulous one!Capable of elevating all the realms of philosophy to a new level of enlightenment!!
Your didactic poems can indeed captivate even the renowned poets and mollify troubled minds....

Anonymous said...

Hi Somil, read ur Poem 1 luv is wat we need very truthful thot yaar!! & a mesmerizing dedication to ur lucky dream mate!! All d best!! God Bless U!!! Tc..

Unknown said...

Thanks a lot Nehal ,for your appreciation !! It really feels good if someone likes your work :))